Feedback (screen based communication 2)

Feedback from Neil

  • Trajan Pro —> good font choice
  • red on black background is effective…black helps focus the viewer unlike white, keep the black…another reason to keep it is to stay consistent with the look I established in the exhibition promotion material
  • “hello my name is…” sounds too studenty, don’t use that “Welcome…” is better
  • looks serious and profesonal
  • text is crisper when rendered as text rather then when it is rendered as an image, so try keep as much text as possible as real text
  • add an ‘enter’ note somewhere
  • multiple galleries is ok (graphic design, fine art, illustration, photography)
  • the site reflects personality, which is what you need
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